不错,写了这么多英文。可惜有很多语法错误哦。
1. there have so many simple mendarin at here makes me feel dizzy
这有三个语法错误。你把mendarin写成单数,与have和many不匹配,而且mendarin 是错别字;at here应为here, 去掉at, 或者把here改成this forum,因为here是副词,前面不加介词;后面的makes me feel dizzy,前面应该加个that. 也就是这里应该写成两个句子,而不是一句。 如果要写成一句,就要在句首加That, 把“there...here' 变成从句。
2. You could also show your opinion but please respect other's.
other's 应该为 others'. 否则请在前加the.
3. I could understand you're not come from a free country。
you're not come from...是错的,应为you do not come from... 或you' re not coming from
4. however, there have freedom alive in most of the development country in the world。
这句有三个语法错误。 have 应为has, 因为freedom是单数,development 应为developed, country应为复数,改为countries,因为前面有most of.